well-written, but typical review for someone of his age, lifestyle...etc. and i am a woman in a happy marriage (fyi) and i liked it cuz it was just fun and i'm lame and sappy like that so suck on that run-on sentence brother of my friend. :)
Why did you write this on my sister's thing? I can take criticism. I honestly feel bad when I upset people. If you are friends with my sister you probably are cool. I generalized about the wives in an unhappy marriage as a joke. Do you see how that might be a funny generalization? I'm sorry that you happened to fit in that group, but please don't take it seriously. No one is perfect. I haven't been able to write full prose for a long, long time. I'd like to get better at reducing things like the run-on sentences. If you ever read my blog again and see something blatantly wrong or maybe even slightly wrong, send me an email about it if you feel like it. (Run on? I'm insecure now). If I read your blog, I could do the same. I just want to get better at editing. We could be informal edit buddies.
And Rachel, thank you for telling your friends about my blog. I love you and miss you.
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